Difficulty Essay

Poetry is not something I naturally gravitate towards. Reading novels brings me much joy and unfortunately I can’t say that poetry does the same. Because of this lack of love for poetry, I didn’t know where to start when it came to finding my poem for this essay. I decided to start with E.E. Cummings, enjoying the work we analyzed in class. My first thought upon seeing “[hist whist]” in Cummings’s long list of poems was that I had never seen those two words before. It drew my attention and I immediately clicked on it. As I read it for the first time I found myself quite flustered. Reading poetry is so unlike reading novels and I quickly realized I was trying to read the poem like one, attempting to form deeper meanings and the poet’s message right away. I had to take a step back and go through it more procedurally, pulling it apart and piecing it back together through the different techniques we have talked about in class, such as TP-CASTT.  

 

First, I had to start from the beginning of the poem, the title. I’m ashamed to admit it, but when I first saw the words “hist whist” I believed it was Cummings using sounds to title his poem, I didn’t realize they were actual words. A quick dictionary search told me that a hist is an “attempt to grab attention or call for silence” and whist is “to be silent”. Already, this completely changed my understanding of the poem, so I reread it with these new definitions in mind. The next phrase that I was unfamiliar with was “hob-a-nob”. Again, at first glance, my brain decided that this must be another sound, not a real word. Learning from previous experiences, I took a chance and looked for a definition and sure enough a hobnob is a “close and friendly relationship”, Cummings using this to describe the connection between the goblins and the witches. This altered my view of the poem as well. 

 

Next, I looked for patterns within the poem. This was a big part of me understanding the poem as each time I reread it I was able to find new patterns that led me to new meanings and ideas. Cummings used both alliteration and repetition largely throughout the poem, creating this rhythm that made the poem fun to read. From the first stanza, alliteration is present with examples such as “tip-toe, twinkle-toe” and later “hoppy happy”. This along with the repetition of multiple words such as “little” and “devil” all gave the poem a rhythm that made it flow nicely and overall a fun read. My thought process was that the continuous use of the word “little” was to imagine these creatures spoken about in the poem as young children, adding this to the rhythmic nature of the poem, I believed that the intended audience of this poem was younger.

 

Overall, I thought the tone of this poem was playful. While the imagery of ghosts, witches, and goblins can be quite haunting, Cummings used energetic and active diction that made this imagery more lighthearted, especially in the first four stanzas. Words like, scuttling, hoppy, rustle and run, and twinkle-toe all contribute to this feeling of lightheartedness. These are all actions that we can associate with young children playing. There’s definitely a shift at the fifth stanza, the tone becoming darker, more sinister. The repetition of the word devil largely contributes to this, especially since towards the end it is isolated and stated four times in a row. Although, there is a shift back to the more playful tone within the very last word “wheeEEE”, the capital letters indicating that shift and bringing back the enthusiasm that was present in the first half of the poem. Even the structure plays into this lively nature, the lack of punctuation and random spacing making it somewhat chaotic. Taking into consideration the rhythm, tone, and structure of the poem, it is clear that Cummings was writing for a younger audience.

 

After reading this poem many times, going through TP-CASTT and dissecting the poem to my best ability, I came to the conclusion that this poem is about Halloween, but I’m still unsure that there’s a deeper meaning to it. To me, this poem is simply an entertaining poem for young children to read around the holiday. I think if you really tried, you could potentially come up with some reasoning that the poem is about the evilness of Halloween, but I think you’d have to really grasp and wouldn’t have meaningful evidence. 

 

Something that I hadn’t expected, but am grateful for, is that I found myself really enjoying this task. The longer I sat with this poem and digested it, the more respect I had for poetry. Hopefully this appreciation grows and maybe one day I’ll love poetry as much as I love novels. 

2 thoughts on “Difficulty Essay

  1. Hey Abbi! I can completely relate to your position as I also don’t have much of an affinity for poetry and I (and Max) love reading novels. However, I do enjoy poetry when I’m able to understand the meaning, and I hope that you were able to do so at least to an extent. Wow, I did the same thing as you as I decided to find poems by authors of poems we’ve done in class and settled with John Donne as you would see by reading my post. Personally, I have no idea what the title of “[hist whist]” could mean and I’m looking forward to seeing if you had any idea. When I read poetry I try to analyze each word, phrase, part, line as much as I can, and if there’s any similarities I’ll try to connect them but I don’t always find a meaning in that connection. Good job for utilizing TP-CASTT which is what we learned together in class in your personal analysis of this poem. It’s always a good idea to search up the definition and/or meaning of words if you have a dictionary at your disposal because words could have definitions and meanings you don’t know even if you’re confident that what you think it is, is all there is, if that makes sense.

  2. Abbi I just want to say I personally applaud you for taking on an EE Cummins poem. I decided to choose a EE Cummings poem as well and I personally think that his style of writing and his message are some of the most unique poetry out there. Your poem sticks out with the rest of your coming poems as very unique and difficult to understand at first glance. I do really like how you use TPCASTT to help you out. I think you might have been the first person that I read to actively point out TPCASTT. I like how you dissected the tone as well as all the other aspects of the poem. I also like how you came to a logical conclusion and you didn’t try to reach for something that wasn’t there. I think you did a great job digesting such a unique poem. Although sometimes we eat Cummings poems it seems like there’s so much there and the meaning that you come out with is so little. The little meaning you grasp from the poem is very difficult to get out and it’s an impressive thing to do. Overall I really enjoyed your blog and poem break down.

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